WALT - write a descriptive paragraph
Success Criteria
- I must use my five sense
- I must use adjectives
- I must use precise verbs
- I must use figurative language
Descriptive paragraph - Fireworks
Excitement filled the room within seconds and a massive smile appeared on our faces instantly. We quickly head outside and, BOOM a flash of sparkles shoot into the dark sky with speed, creating a large circle of bright colours. Just seeing balls of colour in the sky, lit our eyes with amazement. Hearing the deafening whistles along the streets leaving some a bit frightened but still thrilled made us want more .The air turned stuffy ,which allowed us to smell the unpleasantness of the smoke.
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