HAIKU about Sarah

Today we have been learning to write a HAIKU poem in class.A haiku poem is a poem with 3 lines. The first line must have 5 syllables the second line must have only have 7 syllables and the third line must have 5 syllables. They don't have to rhyme.  We have to come up with a noun to write about then we have to come up with at least 3 adjectives which we will use in our poem,  It was a challenge for me because I have to choose my words carefully but I had a good fun doing it with my friends

Lonely John

Jenascia                                                                                                                                 11/08/15

WALT- write a narrative story using storyboard that.

Success Criteria-

- I should introduce the characters, the setting, and what is the tor is about.

- I can use time connectives to sequence the events in my story.

-  I will choose my words carefully so that the readers can draw pictures in their heads.

- I should be able to make the reader learn something after reading my story.

Jenascia    2/07/15

                                       Camping trip screenshot

Today I have been using storyboard that to create a piece of writing using the sentence when I woke up this morning I couldn’t believe my eyes as a starter. I thought that doing this was really fun because I really enjoy using storyboard that and it helps me with my writing. I wrote a story about my family and I going on a camping trip I think it is a really good story especially the pictures that I created. I think storyboard that is a fun and creative website to use.

Today I have just finished completing this maths activity on division facts. I really enjoyed playing this because it helped me to understand it and to help me learn it faster. At the end of this game I got 20 out of 20 and I was really happy about it. I think this game would be good for someone that is struggling and that needs help with their division facts because it can help them like it helped me.

Jenascia 25/05/15

WALT- write a story about an image

  Success criteria

To be successful we will

          - Use different sentence types

      - Use adjectives and adverbs

                          The dog and black cats

One very cold blistering morning David the brown fluffy dog  made a decision that it would be nice to go for a roam around the town then he could peacefully have a nap by the big green trees.

While he was deep asleep David the dog heard a strange little       

noise coming  from the bushes he thought that it might be his owner but

then around the corner came two small black cats. The two cats saw David

sleeping quietly and decided to climb all over  him.

David did not want to upset the two cats and he started talking nicely to them and soon they became friends. A few minutes later David and the cats took a quick stroll around the town. While they were walking around they noticed that the town was very quiet and there was no one to be seen so David and the cats thought it might be a good time to go and search for some food.  

As they were walking around the town quietly, David thought it was time to take them back to his house because they couldn't find any food. When they arrived at his house the two black cats started getting curious because they didn’t know where they were but then after a few days both of them felt welcomed and thought David the dog was very nice letting them stay with him.

A few snowy weeks later David and the two cats decided to play outside

happily.  Later the two cats thanked David and decided to go back home.

Writing games

In this game I had to select the best comment that describes the headline. When I played this I noticed that the word comedian wasn't spelt correctly so I commented on it and got it right. I really enjoyed playing this because you get to spot what is wrong in the story.

Friends

I would like to tell you all about why we need friends.  It is important that we have a friend because a friend is someone that is really nice to you and always plays with you so that you are not alone.

Everyone needs a friend because if we do not have a friend

then we would be doing everything by ourselves when we should

be doing it together and having fun with each other.

The main reason why we need friends is because a friend will cheer

you up when you are down and they will also look after you when you

are sad.

There are lots of reasons why we should have friends but it is important

that we have a friend so that we have someone to talk to.

by Jenascia